Friday, October 6, 2017

Those You - A Conceit Comments

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Yours own hands once loved me
Cared of me
Fed me
Took me walking to ever green path
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Muzahidul Reza
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Robert Rhyme 26 October 2017

Those You are noway good but ever worst,10

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Afin Son 25 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall. extraordinary one

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Afin Son 25 October 2017

Why are those now keeping me far? Torturing me more Throwing me to your hands made fire, I don't know where to go Leaving my homeland printed my toe; greatly done

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Afin Son 25 October 2017

Yours own hands once loved me Cared of me Fed me Took me walking to ever green path In life I found a great rath; great done

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Afin Son 25 October 2017

Those You did well again doing ill, wonderful poem,10

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Offeliya Seema 17 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall. touching poem shared,10

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Evi Evi 15 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall. extraordinary write 1`0

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John Paul 13 October 2017

Poet, it is a really great poem, Those You cared and now murder, so pathetic in tone,10

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Ena Ena 12 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall. ..... tragic in fact and pathetic

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Fiadh Fida 09 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall. this is a great write on the base of recent happening around the world, great done 10

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Emanuel Johnson 06 October 2017

It is so pathetic and tragic written

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2017

Wonderfully crafted and amazingly shared. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Muzahidul Reza 06 October 2017

Yours own hands once loved me Cared of me Fed me Took me walking to ever green path In life I found a great rath;

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Muzahidul Reza 06 October 2017

Why are those now keeping me far? Torturing me more Throwing me to your hands made fire, I don't know where to go Leaving my homeland printed my toe;

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Muzahidul Reza 06 October 2017

I am afraid of those hands will kill me Will cut me Will tear me In your hands made artificial hell Beside your so called prayer hall.

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Charaihatee; Mohangonj; Rajibpur.
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