Friday, October 16, 2009

Those Were The Days......... Comments

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She sits still wondering where the hell she is going to get the next
The wind blows sweeping her hair from left to right
exposing her challenged state to withstand the raving winds;
When it rains, to her it pours shadowing her tears so they cannot see
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Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu
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Bob Blackwell 16 October 2009

Charles, what you have written is a sad tale of what was wasted years for this lady. Often bright lights lure and make many promises, only to exploit and use up the youth of our productive years, the time of preparation for when our youth is gone. You are a very sensitive writer and this comes through strongly in this poem. Keep writing you have a rare gift for it. Regards Bob Blackwell

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Charles Farmkidzzz Mthembu

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Durban South Africa
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