Saturday, September 1, 2018

Those Two Tender Eyes Comments

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The early morning's languorous mild sun
Seemed weary from a nightlong tiring walk,
And shared none of dawn's misty dewy mock-
Play with the passing clouds' hide-and-seek fun,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 September 2018

What a fantastic expression you have made sir! Childhood remembrance is being touchingly inscribed. A great write.10

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The Muse 01 September 2018

Aniruddha, this is a really interesting read.

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 September 2018

Thank you Muse, but I could not get thru to your poems on PH. Any lead?

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Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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