Monday, April 19, 2010

Those That Lie Comments

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whistle as you walk by
don't be afraid of those that lie
inside these iron gates
we are at peace on high
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Juan Olivarez
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Elisabeth Wingle 28 March 2016

Very cleverly written

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Smoky Hoss 18 August 2011

Very good one pard! You certainly are a master story teller with your poetry, it is amazing how you can take the most ordinary things/places and turn a good yarn from them. Keep it up, I so enjoy your writing.

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