Lost amongst a sea of faces,
The day has dawned,
A young heart races,
Summer holidays are over,
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start over.... I see comments you left on my 'Bri Edwards' Heaven On Earth' poem. Thanks. And you
I like it, except for 'bully' part. Well, some 'say' bullies have 'problems' and maybe they should be pitied. hmm?
Jayne, You have seemed to capture my thoughts of late. Ah, to just go back to 1983 and my senior class! To see her once again, at that age, at that time, not sure if my heart could take it. As Bryan Adams sang, Those were the best days of my life. Thank you, Jayne [][
But those old school days, Were the best days of our lives! An accurate depiction. Clear message. Gorgeous layout. Beautiful poem.
A never dying yearning to be once more there! Lovely write Jane.
A great poem, when you leave school the time just seems to fly by.
......(cont.) and your 2013 date on your poem shows you're another old-timer, so you know how much better PH's site used to be. Pity it's partially-deflated now. : ( bri
Yes I have noticed a difference in PH since my return to writing poems.