Saturday, January 3, 2009

Those Of Us Who Live...In Houses Made Of Rose Colored Glass Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are those among us
Who have been, for years,
Living in Houses...not well
Protected Houses...but Houses
...
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Scarlett Treat
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 January 2009

Very interesting piece...I like the duel tones you set....incuding the 3rd stanza, that astutely seperates the 2-tone setting.Stanza's 4 & 5, speak more informally & direct, than the 1st & 2nd....as if you were face to face conversating....and i like this play, as it joins the perfect nexus that draws the perfect parallel of two poetic directions confluencing....Excellent Work! F j R 2009

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Chuck Audette 16 January 2009

Brick is the only way to keep out the big bad wolf, but you don't get much light... -chuck

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Lawrence Beck 04 January 2009

Very nice, Scarlett. Remember, you're not alone. Say the word, and people will come running from all over, bringing tubes of glue. Larry

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