Those two eyes' magnetic and beckoning gesture
Are so mesmerizing with their opulence and glitter.
They seem to be two shining beads of morning dew
Glittering with a glaring sheen in the morning sun beam.
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A truly awesome poem, magnetic just like those eyes. I agree with Valsa below eyes say so much without the use of words. Beautiful poem.....10
Yes, I've been there too - Your poem brings it back to my mind - She was Lebanese in background, dark hair and dark eyes, and she made me think I was walking on air currents for about three weeks and then she grounded me for reasons she never explained - WE CAN STILL BE FRIENDS she said as if that was a possibility!
Eyes immediately catch our attention if they are lively and beautiful! So much has been written about beautiful eyes! They mirror the sorrow or joy within us. They can communicate the language of love without words! I remember having seen your beloved's photograph! Yes she had such beautiful eyes! Enjoyed the poem Amitava!
Tanks a lot Valsa for loving this poem with your your sense of delicacy.
Perfect depiction. Fantastic expression. Thanks for sharing...... 10
Yes, once you look into the eyes of your love they are unforgettable forever. Their mesmerizing effects never do leave you when remembering. Your rhythm is precise and even throughout your poem, Amitava. Love this poem, give you a 10! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn
WOW' its a beautiful peace of a love poem, adoring the person whom you love, so pure and eternal! !
Another lovely poem from a love filled heart.