Wild flowers grew where we once played,
The mountain side was our place,
We sat for hours beneath the sun,
That shone upon that lovely space.
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Nice poem with a reminder to enjoy little things in life instead of finding faults. Full ****
Well, you COULD add 'For' at the start of your title. : ))))))))))))))
How about using 'Thanks' at the start of line 5? And line for line 9, how about 'Thanks for those little things, now always missed.'?
It would sound like a Max Bygraves song if I listened to you Bri : ) : ) Ha Ha
True, Those little things are always missed.
Yes definitely Juhaina x