Those Little Things Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Those Little Things

Rating: 5.0


Wild flowers grew where we once played,
The mountain side was our place,
We sat for hours beneath the sun,
That shone upon that lovely space.

For every moment heaven sent,
Lived with joy each passing day,
For time back then so happily spent,
A precious moment in every way.

Those little things are always missed,
For, no others can replace them now
Those splendid flowers soft, sun kissed
That morning dew that graced the ground.


Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juhaina Tumlu 05 May 2023

True, Those little things are always missed.

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Yes definitely Juhaina x

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M. Asim Nehal 05 May 2023

Nice poem with a reminder to enjoy little things in life instead of finding faults. Full ****

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Thank you Asim x Much appreciated.

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Bri Edwards 04 May 2023

Well, you COULD add 'For' at the start of your title. : ))))))))))))))

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Bri Edwards 04 May 2023

Five stars. That's 5! : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 04 May 2023

How about using 'Thanks' at the start of line 5? And line for line 9, how about 'Thanks for those little things, now always missed.'?

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It would sound like a Max Bygraves song if I listened to you Bri : ) : ) Ha Ha

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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