Saturday, March 5, 2011

Those Ineluctable Sticky Spots Comments

Rating: 4.8

'Sucking too hard on your lollipop, oh, love's gonna get you down.' Mika

All that's left are feelings like sticky traces
lingering in the empty candy pot.
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Delilah Miller
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Khairul Ahsan 17 November 2020

Loved the way the poem unfolded. 'Now, there's only a hollow in my chest, lined with those ineluctable sticky spots gathering dust and teardrops.' - Beautifully concluded.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Delilah M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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