Those Hidden Drops Comments
My eyes were gathering over the vale,
Where I saw a sky is dressed in rags
And it has almost lost its azure flags.
Those broken clouds, asudden, in a gale
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This is a really deep poem and I really enjoyed it, Keep writting your amazing... :)
''My eyes were gathering over the vale, Where I saw a sky is dressed in rags And it has almost lost its azure flags. '' Nice piece of verses, i like the style in which you start the poem, it is an exquisite in flow and content.
The drama of nature according with the human pain, expressed in a metaphorical manner, a melodious enchantment for my ears..Cristina Teodor
very good imagination. VIPINS PUTHOORAN. Those hidden griefs as drops of rain To flow throu' the lashes of my pain
The poet's eye in a fine frenzy rolling, doth glance from heaven to earth , earth to heaven. A Midsummer Night's Dream...by Shakespeare....
The sad looks of nature is wisely contrasted with grief and suffering of a man.It is really great!
Beautiful poem Vip....what can i say? ...you are talented my friend.
powerful in words, graphics, rhyme and rhythm... great work, Vipins!
I see sadness in it. All nature should be beautiful and not ugly. However, you are so wonderful when you give your advise on other people's poems.
Nature is personfied as you gave life to it. Your poem is vivid picturesque discription of nature! Hey Amigo, It is awesome!
A really great poem, with a really great flow. great work my friend.
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8/2/2025 8:03:27 AM # 1.0.0
very strong feelings this poem stirs. Great write Vipins! ! !