Those Hidden Drops Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Those Hidden Drops

Rating: 4.9


My eyes were gathering over the vale,
Where I saw a sky is dressed in rags
And it has almost lost its azure flags.
Those broken clouds, asudden, in a gale
Have become pensive and looked weary
And their fabricated face seemed dreary
They've lost their pride and vanity,
And gone astray from their sanity
But a wind tearing them asunder
And the rumbling sound of thunder
I can hear over the brow of the hill
As their lamentaion and the pale eyes fill
Those hidden griefs as drops of rain
To flow throu' the lashes of my pain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 28 February 2012

''My eyes were gathering over the vale, Where I saw a sky is dressed in rags And it has almost lost its azure flags. '' Nice piece of verses, i like the style in which you start the poem, it is an exquisite in flow and content.

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Cristina Teodor 25 February 2012

The drama of nature according with the human pain, expressed in a metaphorical manner, a melodious enchantment for my ears..Cristina Teodor

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Jinal Oswal 20 February 2012

Nice poem, beautiful description of nature blues.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 19 February 2012

great but is there anything new there.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 18 February 2012

very good imagination. VIPINS PUTHOORAN. Those hidden griefs as drops of rain To flow throu' the lashes of my pain

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Heyyou Boy 01 June 2012

very strong feelings this poem stirs. Great write Vipins! ! !

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Dead Leaf 01 May 2012

nice poem...................................

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Kirstie Deukett 23 March 2012

This is a really deep poem and I really enjoyed it, Keep writting your amazing... :)

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Rizvana Parveen 20 March 2012

beautiful composition.....

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Sam Aleks 01 March 2012

here beauty makes of pain wonder through clever wordplay. great.

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