Friday, August 21, 2009

Those Flowers Comments

Rating: 3.1

They lie there, on the chipped slab
Where no one sniffs its smell
Its beauty does not rouse a talk
Since the dead can't see and tell
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Seema Aarella
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Kesav Easwaran 27 October 2009

nice concept for a poem...presented beautifully, Seema...thanks...10

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Raj Nandy 26 October 2009

IT IS TRUE THAT WE EXPRESS OUR INNER FEELINGS WITH PERISHABLE FLOWERS, THOUGH WE HUMANS SURVIVE FOR LONGER HOURS! LET THE BOUQUET OF FEELINGS REMAIN IN OUR HEARTS AND MIND, - GIVING THEM A TOUCH OF THE DIVINE! -Raj Nandy

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 04 September 2009

Flowery words depicting truth of life and its irony.......

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Indira Babbellapati 03 September 2009

enough to convey crude human greed!

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Marieta Maglas 02 September 2009

excellent poem, very well written, thank you for sharing...............10+++++

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Nikunj Sharma 29 August 2009

Nicely rhymed and written with lot of poetic fragrence........the poem is as graceful as the flowers themselves are. true they give their lives for the pleasures of we the people

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Vaibhav Pandey 26 August 2009

'While a life begins, they are dead.'......a brilliant ending to this very fine poem ma'm.....truly loved it...10

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Reshma Ramesh 25 August 2009

hmmm flowers for every occasion.....well observed seema and well penned....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 August 2009

remarkable piece! beautifully disclosed the fact! 10+

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Obinna Eruchie 22 August 2009

Beautiful life sprung from the dead. This is a wonderful poem, Seema.

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Rakesh Bedi 21 August 2009

....While a life begins they are dead, correct seema and their life makes the others life Unforgettable! The fragrance gifted to the momemts stays fresh in the memory till last.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 August 2009

even after death....lovely i just wrote a senryu inspired by this poem...'a garland'

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rago rago 21 August 2009

interesting........... still fragrance spread...........

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