Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Those Eyes Comments

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I have seen a pair of eyes,
a pair that has seen the light of many days,
and seen the path to follow through the haze.
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Barry Van Allen
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Chuck Audette 24 May 2007

What kind of jelly? Liked the repeated lines/emphasis on the eyes. -chuck

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Dee Daffodil 23 May 2007

Archives? ? ? ? Very nicely done... Hugs, Dee

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Derrick Clark 23 May 2007

this a well written poem, keep it up.

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