Those Eyes Comments

Yeah I can see the similarities between our poems; I can feel the pain in yours too. You’ve expressed the emotions in this poem really well. It’s horrible though isn’t it, how someone can hurt you so much and it seems as though they don't even realise. Very nice poem! :)

But you're blind to me Yes you see me smiling But I'm trully sad You see me laughing But you can't see the loneliness that I have it is baffling me and making joke of it.. read inmy eyes.. oh dear so lovely write...10 rad mine two bright eyes... and brown eyes

''Are you trully blind? Or just closing your eyes? '' interesting poetic stuff....nice poem

Your writing potrays real hurt feelings.