Can you peer through those eyes?
The radiance must be blinding.
As I gaze into them I've come to understand
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This is my favorite one of yours. I like them all, however I think you may be trying too hard. Instead of writing about the meaning of life, write about ONE petal on a flower. Keep it short, too. NO unnecessary words. GRAB the essence of it! People always ask me for advise on this site, and when they ask, I'm honest. Hope you don't mind. Keep writing. You have a lot of great ideas in there. Scott.
Although I prefer the dark romantic poems the beauty of a woman's eyes enthralls me. Kudos
This is a very beautiful poem that seems to be coming straight from your heart. very nice.
You are an amazing poet! each poem has touched my heart Well done
I love the creativity. It's a very sweet and lovely poem. Keep it up!
Very special, these eyes... and the rest of her, too, I guess... (smile) For some reason your poems make me think of Robert Burns... very romantic, he was... please, read my A Love Poem - minimalistic...
This was a very beautiful and touchy poem, Best Wishes to the ones eyes you love.
If i could peer thru those eyes, i will use them to worship the beauty of Love, cause the eyes done lie.In it u see life, hope, strenght and most of all U feel that u are love by the almighty. gud write, keep it!
What a nice piece finely penned! I just wonder whom eyes are 'Those Eyes'. By the way the poem is not that brilliant so I'm just rating it as 10+. (Read mine 'Those Eyes' & 'Shattered')
oh, how beautiful are the eyes used as subject here as a poet's inspiration for this poem... those eyes are made for you just for you hunter...just for you...grace
Another beauty. I really like the way you write. I shall certainly keep my eye open for new stuff as you post it.
Eyes are the windows of the soul and your stunning imagery confirms this. Your poem is beautiful and endless just as are the stars. 10 Karin Anderson
Beautiful... its true if something has beautiful eyes its hard to get enough
I re-visit this poem from time to time and just wanted to dropp a quick note telling you how much I love it. Beautiful poem-I love the second verse and the ending especially.