Monday, July 6, 2009

Those Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can you peer through those eyes?
The radiance must be blinding.

As I gaze into them I've come to understand
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Hunter Dasten
COMMENTS
Aria Siren 03 November 2012

I re-visit this poem from time to time and just wanted to dropp a quick note telling you how much I love it. Beautiful poem-I love the second verse and the ending especially.

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Scotty Dogg 16 December 2011

This is my favorite one of yours. I like them all, however I think you may be trying too hard. Instead of writing about the meaning of life, write about ONE petal on a flower. Keep it short, too. NO unnecessary words. GRAB the essence of it! People always ask me for advise on this site, and when they ask, I'm honest. Hope you don't mind. Keep writing. You have a lot of great ideas in there. Scott.

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Binish Cd 15 December 2011

dear friend, this also a very good poem regards binish

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Joshua Adams 14 April 2010

Although I prefer the dark romantic poems the beauty of a woman's eyes enthralls me. Kudos

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Black Heart 13 April 2010

This is a very beautiful poem that seems to be coming straight from your heart. very nice.

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Leah Ayliffe 30 January 2010

You are an amazing poet! each poem has touched my heart Well done

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Kelly Aragon 29 January 2010

I love the creativity. It's a very sweet and lovely poem. Keep it up!

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bye bye... bye bye 28 January 2010

Very special, these eyes... and the rest of her, too, I guess... (smile) For some reason your poems make me think of Robert Burns... very romantic, he was... please, read my A Love Poem - minimalistic...

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Poetic Soul 04 August 2009

Well penned write, love the imagery.

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Hadyn Rodriguez 03 August 2009

I like this poem very much it's amazing

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Danny H 03 August 2009

This was a very beautiful and touchy poem, Best Wishes to the ones eyes you love.

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Madison M. Cammue 03 August 2009

If i could peer thru those eyes, i will use them to worship the beauty of Love, cause the eyes done lie.In it u see life, hope, strenght and most of all U feel that u are love by the almighty. gud write, keep it!

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Lycko Chizo 03 August 2009

What a nice piece finely penned! I just wonder whom eyes are 'Those Eyes'. By the way the poem is not that brilliant so I'm just rating it as 10+. (Read mine 'Those Eyes' & 'Shattered')

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Lady Grace 12 July 2009

oh, how beautiful are the eyes used as subject here as a poet's inspiration for this poem... those eyes are made for you just for you hunter...just for you...grace

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Sally Carter 09 July 2009

Another beauty. I really like the way you write. I shall certainly keep my eye open for new stuff as you post it.

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Eyes are the windows of the soul and your stunning imagery confirms this. Your poem is beautiful and endless just as are the stars. 10 Karin Anderson

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Aekg Navrilith 06 July 2009

Beautiful... its true if something has beautiful eyes its hard to get enough

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