Saturday, November 15, 2008

Those Eyes Comments

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My downfall seemed clear when I gazed into those eyes,
but the last thing on my mind my certain demise,
captured my attention with just a luminous smile,
and luscious plump lips that would take me for miles,
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Sacred Nephilim
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Viola Grey 15 November 2008

another amazing piece....I love the grace and beauty in the way you write....nice work

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Jane 92 15 November 2008

very strangely i have passed by the exact thing you're talking about and the last line really touched me this poem is the essence of your honest feelings but life still goes on i really liked your poem

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