Thursday, May 17, 2012

Those Bloodshot Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

My breathing was labored
and my saliva was blood flavored
coming from deep in my through
staying away from the battle being fought
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Ernesto Torres
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Miss Darkness 17 May 2012

nice one.. i like it :))

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Dave Walker 17 May 2012

A fantastic poem, really like it. A great write.

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Ernesto Torres

Ernesto Torres

yakima, wa
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