Thoroughly Smitten Poem by Practicing Poetess

Thoroughly Smitten

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I do believe
I'm thoroughly smitten
By a love bug, or something
I've been bitten

I see myself
Drawing into your charms
And then one day
Falling into your arms

I'll want to stay
Held tight in that embrace
As I give way
In that special place



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Tuesday, February 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: falling
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A little bit of humour and truth, mixed in together.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 03 March 2019

watch out girl those arms are traps! then we bend over backwards until we snaps!

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Practicing Poetess 04 March 2019

Haha Chuy; Very amusing comment!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 February 2019

I'll want to stay Held tight in that embrace As I give way In that special place..love, well expressed in beautiful and humourous words. thank u. tony

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Practicing Poetess 27 February 2019

Thank you also, Dr. Tony! Not sure if it's love yet, but that bug really messed with me! : -)

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Louis Rams 26 February 2019

you've been bitten by the love bug and all you need is a tender hug

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Practicing Poetess 26 February 2019

No, Louis, I need the antidote to that bite! That bug really bit me bad! LOL! : -)

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