When the day breaks
with the broken morning memories,
The secondary morning mind
Laughs with dropping eyedrops.
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morning mind Laughs with dropping eyedrops. The owls scream somewhere in dark. Heartbeats rest upon the thorns of life - - // - - ] An emotional moment nicely captured. Thanks & Congrats.
A beautiful poem by Rajit Ghosh, a well deserved selection as members' poem of the day, congrats!
Thank you very much for your critical observation....@Denis Mair
There are so many Thorns of Life breeding many challenges. This Would be a perfect song with a beautiful title.
Nobody needs a list of what the thorns are: we all know them. You speak of the thorns as a kind of poetic shorthand, and for me it works, because you have set the stage. We wake in the morning trailing the debris of broken dreams; our morning routines are like rituals to rouse ourselves for the day's efforts. Thorns are dreams breaking, heart turning pale and inspiration being lost.
A most profound poem. Tenderly written from the heart. Congratulations, Rajat for a well deserved Poem Of The Day! And Happy Holiday!
Sad reflection on a life at its lowest ebb nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing RAJAT.
A meaningful poem and the lines flow so smooth. Thanks for sharing.
Today on the auspicious day of Swaraswati(Hindu goddess worshipped for wisdom) puja, Poemhunter has decorated me with this nice ornament.....thanks to poemhunter. com for this new year gift.On the other hand it makes this festive day a special one.....thank u poemhunter.....
Thanks a lot.Let your words be the inspiration for me....@Dr Dillip K Swain
Thank u very much...... your words are the source of inspiration for me....@Tom Allport
Thanks...Rajnish Manga