Thursday, April 26, 2007

Thorn Comments

Rating: 4.5

It stood with effulgence
Wrapped in a red robe
With petals showing the different shades of its life
Its prepotency was like an illusion
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Shweta Patke
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 March 2008

i had so many thorns in life preceeding..........but got to move on......pal.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 May 2007

Life is not made of bed of roses but full of thorns. When God created roses, why He gave thorns as their companions? God's ways are peculiar. Man cannot understand God so easily.

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Gauri K 26 April 2007

The poem is about love and loving others but wat i feel is actually the poet is scared to love anyone and therefore depicts the darker side of love. The last stanza which depicts the darker side is striking because of the combination of words used. The feelings in the poem are intense and are conveyed very effectively.

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