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A very emotional miserable poem. Great job.

ufff! ! ! ! poision of loneliness grips my heart too -- I can see the pathos too very touching- 10+ love anjali

LOVE IT! ! ! ! keep writing!

heart out of chest is no longer heart 'cause it does not beat - that beat is important, it is the beat we all dance to and the music comes from the heart too.

you seem to be very sad now. sometrhing is on your mind that is bothering you and due to that these verses are flowing out of your wounded heart.

a poignant verses..implicated well..nice piece..A10 4 this Ency Bearis

Wow...its a nice but painful poem..anywayz i like it..well done

Bhayya! This is a very powerful piece. 'rip heart our', , , , tremendous expression........10

wow, i love the way you described the pain and what you wanted to about it, to solve the problem.. it was marvelous 10! ~Hazel G.E

The pangs of love beautifully expressed.A 10!

perfect...........10! !

a very heartfelt sorrowful poem. u get 10++

nice..very much full of pathos...keep writing what you feel.