This World Is So Funny Comments

'The World Is So Funny', but not this poem. It has depth, the communication between the poet and her Lord, 'the game deviser' is unique. 'His cruel eyes were deadly arrows I was made to feel a useless crack' Feelings well expressed here, nice imagery. 'Oh God! I neither wish To become a giver nor a beggar' These lines fit well at the tail of the poem, the tale having been told so well.

beckon light works here (though if i were using it in prose i would probably write beckoning light) , but i wonder if you might have meant to write beacon light, which also fits. I was made to feel a useless crack ok, i guess a useless crack works as well as lots of useless things would. i wonder if this is a personal real story of the author's life. whether it is or not, i find it to be a very engaging tale, well-told, and thought-provoking. but since my thoughts rarely are provoked to continue on one topic for too long............i'll move on to something else! thanks for sharing. i will move it into MyPoemList. bri p.s. let me be more specific. there are many lines i liked in this poem, such as the ones here: I was baffled by the way he looked His cruel eyes were deadly arrows