Tuesday, October 13, 2015

This Wonder Will Never Be Finished. Comments

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this wonder will never be finished.
Since it started not long ago.
We became as one by recipro-
cal consent, out of homes didn’t go.
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Liza Sud
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Daniel Brick 18 October 2015

the first stanza portrays the boundless spiritual realm and everything is holy and connected, but in the second stanza the human scale world seems broken, people disappoint, hopes fail, the world tricks you. So you turn away from it, and seek the wonder always growing bigger and better.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 October 2015

Verily, amazing, wonderful.......10 I invite you to read my poems

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