This Will Be My Last Comments

Too depressing for me.

You have amazing knack of expressing your feeling in the form poems in an enticing manner. Simple is your style but carries ample source and reassurance. Good generation of Ideas! But suicidal tendency is not appreciable hope You change that feeling! 10+++++++++++ 'I can't keep putting this off much longer these thoughts and feelings'

suicide is a common way of escaping our fears we believe we cant deal with but most of the time all we got to do is to attack it head on. nice writing sara and know the night is still young as long as we have breath

Good poignant lines in all your poems, very simple and straight expression.U drive home the idea very well too. But try to be a little more poetic in your lines.

Go for it, Sara! You can do it for you are young and talented! You are among true friends and in the right site! Let it all out of your chest, write, write and keep on writing and let's all know about your tender feelings! 10+++God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

i see your pain and love for him that make you feel like that you see, your talent is a nice way of getting over him and starting a new life do not waste your life to a bad situation a poet so good would be a big loss

It's a sad poetry and keep up ur great work But ur a great poetry writer and I love this poem It makes me cry :)

A great mean of loyalty and true love, it's a Masterpiece, I wish he returns to you and be side by side with you, but by the time if he doesn't then he doesn't deserve and you have to know that God loves and want for you a better one than him, trust me, you have to believe that. anyway, I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem :)