Saturday, January 9, 2010

This Was Real Comments

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I cant seem to focus,
Things seem to become real blurry.
I blink and wipe my eyes to try and get focus.
Nothing seems to work.
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Stephanie Nicole McKean
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Derek Arakelian 09 January 2010

Great poem it kept me wanting more, I like the hazel eyes part.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 09 January 2010

love that last line.... very good!

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Barbara Jean 09 January 2010

I love it! So genius and emotional.

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Stephanie Nicole McKean

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