This Was Not True Comments

Incerdably inductive. Excellent ending! Well done my friend.10+++

A sweet little poem full of the feelings for the beloved! Remarkable simplicity stands out.10+

nice piece it has really touched my heart................10 out of 10

You see smoke with no fire I hope, watch his eyes when he tells you his story if they twitch write him off with another great poem like this+++++++10 regards

hi anju another smasher u have tucked in here... beauty simple...very touching and romantic..nth its surely a tenner cheers

hmmmm soooo romantic and sweeeeet poem...lala.....intersting... really your poetry shows me that you are a good and realistic and logic based poet... and the ideas and subjects are enough new and the way you do it is fantastic... yeah I mean it and love this piece of poem very much..and hope my poetry will also touch your heart if go through seriously..and let me know if its ok to your taste of soul... hope you do one page about my peace willing thoughts and dreams..... a note if you being a good friend wish to be beside in my 7th new books...it; s titel as THE PACE WISHER.... all about my love based peace critiques... afzalshauq@yahoo.com.... yours afzal shauq

When emotions would breath! ! ! A power poem Anjali...... it is really You! ! great work..10

---------------------------- Why say I love you, When you really don’t care, Why say hello, When you really mean goodbye. Don’t tell me your feelings, Did you ever have them, Why hold my hand gently, When you meant to crush my heart. Don’t write me poetry, It was meant for another, Don’t look into my eyes, Coz it was always lies. Why do you say- I was “going to-“ When you never meant to start, Now promise me, You’ll be true, Tell me all this was not true. ----------------------------- beautiful poem...............

Strong and pointed, a wonderful write of a woman taking control of her life and demanding answers. Loved it.

that would make the opponent look within - anice attitude there-10

straight from the heart lines...make us wonder

real life... beautiful lines...

Nice and touchy. 10 for it.

hi anju really interesting... love which is not shown is as useless as the gold cions accumulated by a miser...*10*

Hi Anjali. We all look for the truth in what people tell us. no one wants lies and you have summed up this point very well. thanks for the read Regards Dave T.10/10

I really liked the lines don't write me poetry, it was meant for another, great poem, and glad you liked mine!

do u know ANJALI i think i fell in love with ur pretty feelings and ur pretty mind through this poem. coz really it's too too deep love. and tnx so much for what i read.

Love in question.. Longing for an answer... Knows this art too... That's ANJU!

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 'Why hold my hand gently, When you meant to crush my heart.' those lines are very powerfull

The 'coz' is not in it's place here I feel in a very well-expressed poem. The dissection of sentiments is done well too.