This Was My Dream Comments

a very beautiful poem, dear poetess! the imagery is painted as a child paints. this was my dream- mine too. al loved to read your lovely poen.

To walk by the river; Watching the waves caress watch the sunrise; To hear the cuckoo sing; To chase the butterflies; To kiss the moon goodnight; This is sweetness pure from an innocent heart. Lovely poem. So much i liked it. Thank you dear poetess.

Wish i could go back to my childhood days too and do the same as in your poem. What a wonderful time it would be? Nice.

a nice poem full of dreams for another day? well written.

Good rendition of words. Beautiful train of thought, well articulated and elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Nikhila.