This Very Moment Comments

I like your writing style...this poem, some what, has a free-verse quality while your long lines flow like silk yet, not in formal style. Line and cadence? I like the title.I wrote a poem In the moment { I believe that's the title]. Time is set permanently in 'This Very Moment' then moved to a minute as so forth. 'you can extend this moment by reading, rereading and writing it too' I like this poem, too