This Valentine's Comments

beautiful poem. very sweet too.

good rhyming there and nice wok and keep writing

Aw, very sweet! Delightful, a tad aggressive, but if you both have been awaiting this delightful time of looking into each other's eyes and being in each other's arms, I daresay, a bit of maidenly reserve on her part is only too enticing....I quite enjoyed this...your end-rhyming was great and your rythm fairly good as well. Very nice! ! !