Thursday, March 1, 2018

This Valentine Comments

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How should I celebrate, this valentine?
In this mass-produced city of mine,
Where nothing can be defined peculiar,
Though of very delicate design…
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
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Bri Edwards 02 May 2018

defined singular? ? I do not understand its meaning. i'll bet you DO HAVE something better than MONEY! ! ! I LIKE the rhyming. to MyPoemList. i'd type: Love makes the world go 'round, they say. bri :)

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Perdita Young 05 May 2018

1) How about the word peculiar? Just replaced it...2) Money makes the mare go. is what i had in mind at the time of writing...so i chose to drop the word round...Thank you for pointing it out and I will sure rethink about it :) 3) I feel much honored that you like the poem, a big encouragement that is. -Perdita

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