Tuesday, October 27, 2009

This Typhoon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stink was the smell of the atmosphere
And silent cries are all that you hear.
This typhoon brought heavy destruction
But there’s a sure hope for our nation.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Joseph Poewhit 02 November 2009

Much inspiration. Nature can be cruel

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Ion Untaru 02 November 2009

very good poem, rated with 10.

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Fay Slimm 01 November 2009

This is a mature, appealing and very moving poetic achievement Obed and it does credit to your age and ability - - I rate this top marks and do keep writing - you have much yet to offer the reading public....10 from Fay

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*Shalimar ~ Mageswary* 30 October 2009

its very of its very nice but i just cant believe that u are still small but very intelegent keep it up

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 27 October 2009

memories of beloved and the lost ones. gorgeous!

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Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

Marikina City
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