This Train Of The Dawn Comments

Rightly I read and feel the scene of train passing through city's heart as you have shown in picture. I love such train poems.

Dawn's train is getting breeze of journey. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

A tremendous extended metaphor of the train journeying to heaven, with passengers who are pilgrims. A visionary poem.

Golden horizon! ! ! With the muse of nature! Thanks for sharing.

A beautiful metaphor! Our life on Earth is a train journey and we are headed for eternity! Here we are not merely travelers or tourists set out for sight seeing, but pilgrims! Great piece!