This Toy Is Broken Comments

When am down am down When am up am up When am walking this road, empty is this hate am feeling I’ve lost my twin not to marriage but to a broken heart Can but two broken hearts mend? I’m on the shelf am waiting Oh dear poet...this one is a classic one. I just loved every word of it. It was a pleasurable reading. Thanks for sharing the poem. I invite you to my page and to give your valuable rating and remarks on my poems. 10 for this poem.. Thanks. Subhas

Woah aha attractive eh! Gorgeous to read. Real life's interesting styled poem! Tc.