Sunday, December 9, 2012

This Time I Made It Comments

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The breeze came a blowing
And the darkness went a flowing
It's the same old thing
same cycle, same ring
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Noah Body
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Unwritten Soul 01 April 2018

This poem is different than other topic that i used to read, the way you make it blend it and write it, that so smooth and i really enjoy read it...especially when i put myself in every line you said it here...the end was so great But this time i made it...there is something or maybe power in it!

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Tony Karas 01 April 2018

Thank you for your nice comment. It is basically an accurate poem. The black always comes back yet somehow I make it.

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