Friday, April 18, 2014

This Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

This time is very precious,
as I feel you by my side.
This feeling comes with a light,
with a true hope,
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Kirti Sharma
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Khairul Ahsan 29 June 2014

'The strongest bond binds us until eternity.' - is a very strong statement. And when this is true, 'I failed, you won. And your victory is mine. And our love is immortal ' - is possible! A nice poem, well done!

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2014

Another nice poem, by kirti.

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Saurav Singh 18 April 2014

that was damm gud, I think its a first person account. Hope it til eternity. : -)) .

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