Sunday, August 3, 2008

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Sitting in my room alone
Waiting for you to come through
Wishing what we had was back
What i need is you
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Joe Doti
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 August 2008

This piece was fine till it got into the last few lines. Suddenly, it got confusing. It was as if certain parts were missing. Very strange. GW62

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Livi Topley 03 August 2008

Wow! Its incredible, I felt like I could really understand how much this guy was missing this girl. I wish I could write like you!

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