Saturday, March 15, 2008

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She looks good in color.
She looks to break your will
She looks so pure in white
& she looks like she could kill
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Brittany Marsh
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Jurietta Duraan 15 March 2008

Your poem provokes all kinds of emotions... it is a very good poem and very mature.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 15 March 2008

Very well written....good poem

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Brittany Marsh

Brittany Marsh

jamestown NY
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