Saturday, November 14, 2015

This Talk Of Liberte Comments

Rating: 5.0

You find your way back from the edge
dizzying heights
Impossible sights
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Edmund Strolis
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Savita Tyagi 15 November 2015

Fairy tales burn when evil returns. Such a realistic thought written with so much sensitivity. Trying to keep a level head amid all the chaos with out being heartless is what this poem speaks to me. Loved the imagery. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Pamela Sinicrope 14 November 2015

Fairy tales burn when evil returns. This poem is well written... It's cadence and the pattern are appealing in the reading. The message is clear, yet the choice of words and images is unique and riveting... Especially the second stanza. That final line spoke volumes to me as I enjoyed so much reading your other poetry where you dream freely, unabandoned, as if in a fairy tale... Now with our current events, we're all thrust into tragedy. Nicely woven poem Edmund.

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