Saturday, May 14, 2016

This Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun is beating hard to suck the water
And pond is playing with breeze
Surrounded by the lush green grass
On which cattle are grazing fearlessly
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 28 May 2016

Very harsh summer.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Summer! ! With the muse of the heat at work. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 14 May 2016

I am looking forward to the warm sun too. (we are supposed to get a frost tonight)

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Akhtar Jawad 14 May 2016

Another nice poem on summer, very well penned.

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B.m. Biswas 14 May 2016

A true representative poem of summer....a smooth glow og feelings like summer breeze....thanks.

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M. Asim Nehal

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