This Street Life Comments

more favorite lines: But just after their first big bite, Their second slice, was not as nice................i at first read big bite (a nice alliteration) as dog bite! ha ha. but not so funny, i guess. and more: In life they’re things, we do ignore, But some mistakes we just can’t cure.. great advice! bri :)

I “m not as old, as I may seem But for years, that’s how its been...............did the officer or the woman/girl say these words? Many men and women too, Walked this street just like you..........i find it interesting that you put men before women. there are male prostitutes (so i've heard) but i never heard of them years ago. are they more prevalent than female hookers in Toronto, i wonder. (to be continued?) ...........

favorite lines: I may not know you good enough But let me add, this friendly touch This street life its way too rough. i found what i consider some minor grammar gaffes {i probably NEVER used the word gaffe before today! } {i mean 'mistakes'}, but i like the poem enough to send it to MyPoemList. (i may continue in another comment) ............. bri ;)

Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment. a brilliant way to pin your brilliant thoughts

Believe me... I feel privileged to be able to read this one.. yes, its always the second bite that matters...

In life they’re things, we do ignore, But some mistakes we just can’t cure.....we still ignore until last dregs of street and we still endure to make more mistake, wonderful word of wisdom that we need to know onto the end, interesting write by ingenuity,10++, thanks for inviting me to see