Monday, September 6, 2010

This Spectral Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

That girl, she loves my jazz

Eyes closed, she twirls
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Yoni Assis
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Jazib Kamalvi 20 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Yoni A. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 21 November 2017

That girl, she is A wounded bird But she laughs all night long How she laughs A lovely incarnation of your eros, so beautifully knitted into a poem. Great creation dear poet. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++ for it. Subhas

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Roseann Shawiak 22 January 2016

Lighthearted and happy, a lively little poem of fun! Enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Lauren Sydney 21 January 2016

love this !

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Yoni Assis

Yoni Assis

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