Wednesday, February 6, 2008

This Slouching, Stooping Man Comments

Rating: 3.5

there's some thing about this man
tall, stooping now with the weight of his belly
with a casual smile
and a glow in the eyes.
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sreelekha premjit
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the character of the man stands out in this poem.....lovely

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I love this depiction of a loveable huggable bear of a man, with its semi-ironic title, n all. t x

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David Taylor 06 February 2008

Very nicely done, An open heart is so attractive.. David

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