The sequence of mental state from afternoon to the sun set has been narrated very beautifully. My pick of lines in this composition are,1.The long afternoon inches away measuring it's own hollowness
2.Grammar of life punctuates this phase 3. It only sedates the inner turbulence.
Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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The sequence of mental state from afternoon to the sun set has been narrated very beautifully. My pick of lines in this composition are,1.The long afternoon inches away measuring it's own hollowness 2.Grammar of life punctuates this phase 3. It only sedates the inner turbulence. Thanks for sharing.10 points.