This Sea Of Tears Comments
This sea of tears is a vast wasteland
That a maiden burdens with an imprinted hand
Creating swells and blustery typhoons
Breaking the core of the harvest moon
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The rhyme is awesome, especially the last one, imagery also printed well in this poem, well done Theo_Unwritten Soul
A perfect rhyme! Its realy great, the metaphors are beautiful.
A perfect rhyme! Its realy great, the metaphors are beautiful.
A perfect rhyme! Its realy great, the metaphors are beautiful.
A great poem indeed, hey: 'Theo is a wonderful WORDSMITH, ' I say!
This is just phenomenal. Wow. I loved it.10/10 great work. Continue writing.
hey Theo this is really great your rhymes are fantastic! x tamara
I like these two lines especially: Breaking the core of the harvest moon Causing the tides to differ and change
Theo, i think you have understood the meaning of rhyming! that's perfect! THEO, THE LORD OF RHYMES! ...
Wow, amazing, I can really see how you felt when you were writing this. Good rhyming too! !
This sea of tears is a vast wasteland And this sea of tears could do nothing but cry. very objective & effective lesson for anyone who is willing to understand.
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7/29/2025 10:17:34 AM # 1.0.0
the maidens tears are torrential and disasterous. i see now why the pirates didn't want them onboard their ships. nicely done.