Monday, May 8, 2017

This Room Comments

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This room
Is it the familiarity or the loneliness
Is it the darkness that haunts me
Is it the night drizzle that creates a horror
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Otevia Andrew 28 November 2017

A heart that truly loves usually bears the scars of broken relationships, death of loved ones etc. yet love remains the greatest among all things. Well done, dear poet.

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Rajnish Manga 08 May 2017

I don't see any logic tn repeating the text twice over. A reader can visualise the situation where lovers unite to seek pleasure and then part their ways. This results in a heart-break and depression for the lover. One should come to terms with reality as soon as possible. Thanks.

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