Tuesday, September 20, 2022

This Rocks! Comments

Rating: 4.3

A rock is a rock,
It may be deduced.
But there are three different forms,
Depending on how their produced.
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Douglas Nichols
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Bri Edwards 29 September 2022

I gave this one 5 stars, for its information and for its rhyming and flow, and for my ease in understanding that which I learned in school YEARS AGO.

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Bri Edwards 29 September 2022

2nd stanza is a favorite. I used to hunt for fossils in slate (or was it shale? what's the difference between these two rock forms?) . 'It's much slower in it's cooling, ' ONLY ONE of your TWO 'it's' is spelled correctly.

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Bri Edwards 29 September 2022

'Depending on how their produced.' 'Their' and 'they're', the contraction for 'they are', are pronounced the same BUT have different meanings. Use 'their' to indicate possesion e.g. 'their birthdays are on the same day'.

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