Thursday, June 6, 2013

This Road Comments

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This road that i take is a road of a maze
Thorn bushes and poison berries, Wild weeds and snare of bugs
Along the way of this road
I walk in hesitant...with strong urge to always go back
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Annette Liliann
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Wahab Abdul 06 July 2013

i would not comment on the theme is there and everywhere, every theme can not be a poem, in this poem you lack flow..rest fine and nice...go ahead keep writing...

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Patricia Grantham 05 July 2013

There are so many paths that we can take. We don't always know where they will lead us. There are some signs up ahead though that will give us some kind of hint. In this poem came the sign of a whisper that would be a door to love. An awe inspiring write.

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