Monday, February 23, 2009

This River Comments

Rating: 5.0

Reflections in the water, flowing,
Directions for the way, its knowing,
Connections with the breeze that’s blowing,
As this river travels on.
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Ernestine Northover
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Stephen Stirk 02 March 2009

Abslotely beautiful. Nature painted so eloquently using words instead of brushes. A truly captivating piece, and I'm always biased towards rhymne Great work Steve

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Andrew Blakemore 27 February 2009

A delightful piece Ernestine, so calm and so soothing. Wonderfully written. Love, Andrew xx

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Gordon Wilkinson 24 February 2009

as i look down what do i see this river reflecting at me This was magic - excellent - 10

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Duncan Wyllie 23 February 2009

The rivers sings a beautiful song as it travels ever on, such wonder in the sights and colours A lovely serene piece of writing by you again Ernestine Wonderful Love duncan X

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