Thursday, August 23, 2007

This Reunion Shocks Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish I could start from where we began,
To have you comprehend...
What makes me 'tick' within.
To have you instantly feel what is felt,
...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Joseph Daly 25 August 2007

I like this Lawrence. The narrative has a tenseness to it that is maintained throughout. The use of occasional rhyme works very well and aids, rather than hinders, the flow of this poem

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x... x... 23 August 2007

Stoli~~~~~~~coming right up. It's in the freezer, orange flavored.....Stoli and club soda please. Great poem. Yeh, we're older but, if we feel young in our hearts, than young it is we shall always be. Age is just a number on your passport. ~~mm.xo~~

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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